Xiaopodupi your diary today, the students are not out of the sun one day, really bad, my father bought two goldfish, one raised to drown in a vat, I am very sad.
Monday, 30 October 2
clear day today, not out of the sun, really bad, my father bought two goldfish, one raised to drown in a vat, I am very sad.
Comments: I am sad that I live so much, in February had never met than one on the 30th too! Have never seen no sun sunny, but not seen a drowning goldfish.
1. Title: The side of the side ... ... ... ...
children to write: his clothes off one side, while pants.
Teacher comments: he in the end is to take off or wear ah?
2. Title: One
children to write: I am one of an injured left foot.
Teacher comments: You are centipede it?
3. Title:
children write after another: from work, my father's home after another.
Teacher comments: You have several fathers in the end it?
4. Title: sad
children write: ditch section in front of my home very sad.
Teacher comments: the teacher is more sad.
5. Topic: Another ... ... and ... ...
children to write: my mother was short and tall, fat and thin.
teacher comments; your mother is a deformation of magic it?
6. Topic: Look
children to write: What you looking at! Ah
never seen the teacher comments: not seen
7. Title: thriving
children write: thriving Wing confession.
Teacher comments: Do not look too much drama!
8. Title: delicious
children write: delicious ass.
Teacher comments: Some things can not eat.
9. Title: The innocent children
wrote: really hot today.
Teacher comments: You're naive.
10. Title: indeed
children wrote: Yesterday I ate fruit, and turbid water.
Teacher comments: is the word
11. Title: The first ... ... further ... ..., example: eat first, then ablution.
children write: Sir, good-bye!
Teacher comments: Imagination is more than the wisdom of the earth.
12. Topic: What is
children to write: a train passing Furthermore Moreover What is the status of
Moreover Moreover, the teacher comments: I have to die
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